Part of a Story i jus wrote please tel me if its bad or good?

“Open the door!” said a voice from a room across the hall. People everywhere quickly sped around the old dirty house. A man opened the door like the voice had said and stepped away as if waiting for something to happen. Men grabbed numerous weapons on the wall and got them loaded and ready. “What’ going on?” said Darius loudly over the sound of loading weapons to his friend. “They’re coming” said Darius’ friend seriously. “Whose coming?” said Darius with a worried look on his face. His friend stopped staring into Darius’ eyes and looked into the sky. He pointed his finger up and gasped. A silver object flew by at lightning speed shaking the old house as if there was an earthquake. Then out of nowhere there was no sound. No woman and children crying, No men yelling in anger, and no gunshots ringing off could be heard. People started to mage their ears because of the weird event happening as did Darius. But it didn’t help. Silver streaks were flying everywhere, but nobody could get a